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Okay, first off LOVE the realism here. Farther more I really like were your going. First thing I would recommend is that you smudge your shading especially around the the girth. Now I notice on the left front foot you started to add some fuzz between were hoof begins and fur ends, that looks nice, I would make that a little bit more refined and put it on all 4 feet. Now with the hooves I would try and give them some texture, kinda some faint and really smudged lines up and down and side to side so it looks more realistic (here are some refs [link] [link] [link]) I like what your doing with the veins, they look good and add to the realism of the image.
Now the ears just look weird, I now you just following your ref, but I would change that. I think you should try and make the left ear back like the right one, and the right one could be a little bigger. I would also try to cover up much of the ear with the forelock (or at least thats what I do so you can't tell) Now with the mane and tail because your going for realistic, I would really right to make them look wispy, now I'm not very good at that but I can give your a awesome tutorial [link]
I also made you a red line [link]
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Oh I haven't touched this with the smudge tool yet, so yeah, it will definately be smudged a lot more than this. :)

And the ear will be covered with mane too. :nod: Thank you so much for the hoof tips! :faint: I really needed help with those :tighthug: Fuzzies on the coronets- well actually I wasn't trying to make them but you're right, I should most def add them in. XD Dangit, there are still pieces of those silly Spirit-hooves leftover even in this! :laughing:

I've tried Aomori's tail tutorial before and it really doesn't look good if your tablet's pressure sensitivity doesn't work :( (like mine) I found a good hair-brush from `adonihs though :dummy:

Your redline link doesn't work :noes: Can I find it in your scraps?

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It doesn't here maybe I gave you the wrong link [link]

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;) Thank ya

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