CommentsDevious CommentsThank you so much for critiquing this deviation. No one I know is really much of an arist (besides ~mustangspride) so I appriciate the outside look at it.
I did try to keep it a tiny bit cartoony, as the comic will be. I notice the breast muscle (really muscles) looks funny - I think i tried to merge them, because seperate they looked....bulky? Too realistic? Beats me. But all in all, thank you so much. I'll keep this in mind. -- BLACK TIE AFFAIR 17.3h Warmblood |
As far as the horse goes, her head seems a bit small, or more likely her neck is set too short, which makes her head seem a little too small. Her mid section looks fat because of her neck and she looks a bit high withered. (of course this is all easily fixable
Both her back and front lets look nice, the anatomy seems correct, especially the back legs, they look very nice.
The shading in her midsection is a bit strong, perhaps blend that in a bit next time? And her legs could use a bit more shading (especially the green one) Maybe added a little more shading and highlights to the mane and tail?
Also her breast muscles, horses have too big muscles in the front, I noticed that you made enough room for both of them but you only defined one, maybe add just a little shiver of shading in the middle to help define the other side. This will also help define her shoulder from her breast.
Her face is a bit cartoony but I like that
So over all very good job, just a few little things I would fix next time if I was you.