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Artist's CommentsTHIS TOOK FOREVER!!! (and it still looks like crap) Believe it or not this damned thing has 70 layers in it. The character herself only took like a 1 and a half, but the background must have taken me 4 hours Well anywho, this is Luna [link] =Blood-Charm999's character as a Anthro And this would be =Blood-Charm999's prize for winning my mare game (I'm putting a lot of effort into my mare game prizes so that hopefully next time around more people will play...well at least I'm trying to, whether or not it looks like I don't know...) I hope she looks okay Artwork Copyright me =Littlekirara Luna Copyright ![]() ![]() Comments
Awesome!
The pose is very nice, and the background was well worth the time you spent on it. Little much lensflare. -- sub-account of ~lethe-gray stock photos ~dtf-stock Oh that is very nice Kirara! I cant wait for more! You do anthros so good!
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Yeah I was worried about that, I just couldn't get the look I wanted so I keep adding and adding. -- I'm a member of Marik's Evil Council Of DOOM [link] ----------------------------------------- Thanks hun
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Critiques
also cascadance is right, try highlighting the character from the moonlight. it will make the picture glow and have sparkle to it. also white highlighting i wouldnt sugest.
otherwise GREAT JOB!!!!
the background is perfect its not too cartoony and not to real!!! beautiful job!
P.S. i love her dress it's very detailed and i could tell you put a good effort into it!
What would improve the background the most IMO is fewer brushes. It looks like you have definately been using the brush crutch when you painted in this background- I can see it in the grass, the stars, the moon, and the trees. I know brushes are a great shortcut when you're running low on time but a lot of times they don't fit in with the style of the rest of the picture. I.e. your horse is cartoony and the background has quite detailed shapes. Perhaps you could try using the blur tool on the grass and tree. That would make the background tie in together with the less-detailed, cartoony theme. Also, do you notice how the mountains have a yellow highlight where the moonlight hits them? That looks really really good, try putting that highlight in other places too like along the top of the tree and even on the charachter. Again, it will unify the piece and make it all look anchored and together like it is a real landscape that you could walk right into!
Homg. The detail in her clothing is fantabularifficawesomeamazingness!
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